Looking for feedback on a video! :)

[AvereMista]

Looking for feedback on a video, i recently got a laptop so now i can edit better, its a fortnite video but trust me im not a fortnite youtuber, i just like to play it here and there casually, plus a couple of my subs asked for it
!! my channel is "Avere Mista" any feedback would be awesome thanks

 

[ShaDope]

To be honest, ur videos are amazing. They r high quality and good audio, and everything is just amazing.
I would say just keep up the grind , maybe work on the branding and i feel like you could sound a bit more happy and excited. Also, maybe try get a few collabs to get your name out there. Hope this helps.

 

[Crown]

Moved to the review / feedback forum.