Looking for advice

[KritikulHit]

Hey all,
If you have a few mins free please check out a couple of my vids and suggest ways in which I could edit my vids better, I usually cut about 30 mins of gameplay into a 10-15min video, but not sure if all I keep is worth watching, what do you think?


If any other gaming channels want to collab I'm always up for it!

Peace out!

KritikulHit

 

[Hardisk]

Not enough entertainement comes to my face fast enough.

Your latest video takes 21 seconds to get from the intro to "hey guys wassup it's Kritikulhit, and today.." I understand it's part of a serie, but if i'm a random user I will click away 5 seconds in.

You need to do something to entertain right away , a good example is Athene :

Is him acting "dicky" adding anything to the video's content? no
Is it entertaining as hell? Y.E.S, HELL YES !

That's why there's 824 156 views on this video, in the end we don't even care about the record he talks about, we are just entertained by his persona.

TL;DR : Quick entertainement , fast and funny, this is the internet.

Also get a better mic and add compression to your voice, sounds better.