It's good. Funny. I would try cutting out long parts of no talking unless something significant is happening and the music in the intro screen is a little loud. Other than that, not bad at all.
Also, reviews are the bread and butter of the site, but there's also Let's Plays and Pokemon Talk (that kind of merged in because so many wanted it). The format I use is 2 Let's Plays followed by a review unless either people want to see more (then I do 3-4 and keep going) or it's too short (like my latest one coming out, Sky Pig, will only be 1 Let's Play).