Okay sure then
Fireshockreviews: Your banner really isn't all that great. It doesn't look like an eight year old could have made it but at the same time, it looks really tacky and amateurish. It doesn't appeal to me as a channel I just really have to watch to find out what it's all about. You don't have many videos on this channel so the review can't be that huge. The image that you used for your batman review thumbnail is kind of disappointing. Watching the review and seeing ALLLL those awesome screenshots and angles you could have used and you used a basic video game art with the 360 logo on it looks pretty basic and unappealing. But then onto your actual video review. You audio is good. No problem there. Seeing how your channel looked very amateur I wasn't expecting much but then 1 min in you blew me away with your confident voice and great commentary. But I also noticed the video is like 24 mins long and wondered "What video game review is actually 24 minutes long if the commentary is this good?" I quickly figured out why. I've never play Batman Arkyum Asylum but I have seen plenty of game video reviews. The first 14 mins of your video is COMPLETELY unnecessary and unneeded. In a video game review your DO NOT give the complete story and outline of the game. That is considered a spoiler and nowhere did you mention that you were going to have spoilers. The point of a review is to tell viewers reasons to and/or not to buy a game and leave it up to them whether they want to purchase it or not. A review doesn't completely tell the video game story. If I wanted to find out more about the game before I bought it came across your review I would be p****d. As a gamer, this review slightly angers and breaks my heart. Those gamer feels. :c
FireshockHD; As previously, your banner isn't all that great. It looks amateurish and low quality. Your entire channel doesn't come together in some places, specifically with the font, and how you seem unsure so you mix and match up the font colors and such. Make sure your font contrasts from the background so it can easily be read and thus stands out to the eyes. You can't go wrong with a simple white font color if it contrasts. And don't use bright green font color if it doesn't match the entire theme of your channel and doesn't match the thumbnail either. It looks really bad and unprofessional. Your channel has a consistency of red, dark blue colors that makes your channel look consistent and pro. Don't add random, bright colors that don't match anything at all. Then there's your commentary. You have a good mic, easily understood but then your commentary isn't up to par. I've had to mention this to so many other gamers. You have to have interesting, fun commentary. If you aren't humorous and entertain your viewers don't expect to make it far on youtube because there are so many others like you that don't have entertaining commentary. Your chances of making it will fall lower and lower and those that actually are funny and make others laugh will easily overshadow you. Because just like those of you that have bland commentary, there are lots of people that have humorous commentary that are competing for popularity.[DOUBLEPOST=1416942905,1416941571][/DOUBLEPOST]
Critique mine please, if you have time! As nit-picky as you want
You banner looks just like a place holder but that's okay coming from a person that doesn't even have that. Your thumbnails are awesome. The newer thumbnails are a lot cooler and expressive than the older, but still very cool. The video quality is very high and the audio is crisp and clear. I like how in your more recent videos you angle the camera so the viewers can see the actual keys. Your channel is just really awesome and really good. I don't really have any critique at all for you. That's why you're closing in on 1k subs. Just keep up what you're doing. You're prone to get views since your videos are so searchable.