Okay let's go:
*Great thumbnails! Really draw you in.
*Consistent upload schedule. Nice and crisp avatar/banner art.
*On the Black Ops 3 vid I feel some light hearted goofy music may compliment your sarcastic humour. The game's mainly SFX so it should hopefully fit nicely.
*Your voice was picking up your analogues etc. You're also popping the mic a bit so it might be a bit too close to your voice or set too high on sensitivity. I'd also advise compressing the audio so it doesn't peak too high.
*With the Minecraft vids I'd cut 'em down a bit. A lot of people are put off from uploads higher than 20 mintues. Jump cuts would help make the commentary concise and focused.
*Be careful of audio volume. I check out your 'anal penetration' (=S) video and I couldn't hear your commentary at all at some points.
Mainly just make sure you're conscious of the mixing and cut down any filler =][DOUBLEPOST=1456959832,1456959218][/DOUBLEPOST]
Okay focusing on this vid in particular:
*Thumbnail text is a bit tame. The lack of a border makes it blend into the background image so some black lining would make it pop more.
*I'd suggest zooming onto the images you use a bit more. Character's faces, weapons, power stances etc to exemplify the overall theme of the video. If it's too far away and the viewer has to zoom in to see the details of a thumbnail you're in trouble.
*Great AV Quality.
*Very neat sub prompt!
*Commentary sometimes gets a bit blurred with the gameplay. Make sure your commentary is compressed and stays above the gameplay.
*Some of the game's more subtle music may benefit your video. Especially the bit when you're explaining the different battles going on between each character.
*Great use of the endslate.
*Also concerning the overall channel I'd suggest more consistent videos. Recently you've been mega active but there was a lull a few weeks ago. Make sure you pace the channel out so people can rely on knowing when you upload.
Good stuff dude! I see massive potential here =D[DOUBLEPOST=1456960679][/DOUBLEPOST]
I checkout out your Far Cry video first:
*First thing I noticed was the pause between you speaking and the opening title. First impressions made me feel like you weren't ready to deliver the line so make sure to cut that small bit of dead air (it makes a huge difference).
*Next the audio. The game audio was pretty quiet and the commentary more so. I assume it's the mic more than the placement of it but right now it sounds like you're talking from inside a cupboard.
*I like the avatar/banner. It's simple yet effective.
*The thumbnails however are pretty dull. The text on the Far Cry video is extremely thin/small. The image of the Sabretooth is a cool image but it's too zoomed out/muted. More contrast would make it stand out and if it's more on the sabre tooth's face it'll stand out.
Your channel's very new so there's a tonne of stuff still to learn. However with that said, don't settle for okay and keep learning. The faster you make mistakes the better you'll be at addressing them =D[DOUBLEPOST=1456961359][/DOUBLEPOST]
Before I go into your channel I need to let you know that your YouTube page in the address doesn't work (Typo maybe?):
*I checked out the Kuwait art. Massively impressive but no music. Viewers only have 2 sensed to experience YouTube: Sight and Hearing. If you leave one out it's a huge handicap to your work.
*At the end have you through of doing some fun panning or zoom shots of the final product? It'd make it seem more dramatic XD.
Not much more I can point out due to the length of the videos and the fact your channel's very new. More than anything just keep going and always look for ways to improve =][DOUBLEPOST=1456962506][/DOUBLEPOST]
*I like the artstyle of your channel a lot. It's very charming =]
*The audio/AV is also great as it's well balanced.
*Really well edited. Context given with each article, post, example etc. A lot of effort put into each video's continuity.
*Make sure to create/link a twitter and facebook page. YouTube may be your hub but social media is your outlet to expand and grow.
*Make sure you're consistent with uploads. If once a week is too much fair do's, but once every two should be a safe goal.
Not much more I can say. Keep up the good work =]
