I would like some HONEST feedback.

[ThomasClaessens]

Hey guys,

So I just switched to doing commentaries instead of funny moments but my audience retention is relatively low and I wanted to ask all of you to give me a point in the video where you would click off easily and why. Am I explaining something too much, overusing an sound effect, sounding monotone,...?

Thanks, any feedback is welcome!
Thomas a.k.a Exive

Channel: (Latest videos) htttp://www.youtube.com/exivegaming

 

[Winger94]

Hi buddy I watched your latest video (the SHITTIEST DAY IN MY LIFE one) and audio/video quality were really good. Maybe i wasn't so involved after the third minute but I continued to watch to see how it would end. It's good that you share with tour subs and viewers bits of your life but maybe your voice sounded a bit monotone in my opinion. Try to be more involved by your speeches (in the limit of not fakeness of course xD). But overall it was good!

 

[ThomasClaessens]

Hey dude, thanks for the reply. I'll try to work a bit on my voice to keep it interesting! Thank you so much for the feedback!