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Grgak Please Stop Calling My House

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I'm fairly new to the whole thing in terms of making it work so okay... *braces self for harshness*

(Just want to note that I'm aware of the bad quality of film on some of the earlier videos, I upgraded my camera to compensate...!)

Lemme know if you can't access my channel. I'm new here to and everything I say or do seems to be being moderated still. =)
 
I actually haven't done anything like this yet sooo......go right ahead! :)

Meh just another lets play channel.

Firewatch is so overdone lol.

Try and branch off and do things that people would not expect.

Joel from vinesauce watched Bob Ross and tried to paint what he was doing in Mario Paint.

Try to do something different.

Your outro is okay generic but okay.

No intro though.which is meh.

Audio is okay, and your profile picture is okay.

Just a bland let's play channel haha.


TeamToone FItness - Please take a look and tell me any thoughts/suggestions you have

I mean.

It's a fitness channel, it's decent but I mean.

I know nothing about fitness besides my own little workouts so I mean.

I don't know what to say lol[DOUBLEPOST=1456368714,1456368079][/DOUBLEPOST]
Review mine, it's fairly new so there is not that much content on it yet

Your edits are garbage, honestly.
Theres no fluidity but instead just a copy paste feel. No thanks.

Horrible profile picture and banner but it's a new channel. I'll let it slide.

Audio quality is okay.

Nothing to fancy.

I can't give much criticism to someone that just started out so I mean.

Work on using motion tweens to your advantage not to mention having any images prepared before hand as looking at your videos it felt just ON THE SPOTish and with edits you really need to think them out accordingly.

xxooxoxoxo




I'm fairly new to the whole thing in terms of making it work so okay... *braces self for harshness*

(Just want to note that I'm aware of the bad quality of film on some of the earlier videos, I upgraded my camera to compensate...!)

Lemme know if you can't access my channel. I'm new here to and everything I say or do seems to be being moderated still. =)

Honestly I could not watch your Mental Health video
Not my cup of tea, it did not touch my heart strings or inform me in any way lol.

Your intro needs a lot more work, it's boring honestly.

No outro but whatever I guess.

The channel has a newbie feel to them, your edits are okay but they are nothing to write home about.

I guess just work on your intro mostly.

idk lol
 
Why do you have a green screen when it's not even used?
Not set up yet or?

Uh the music is really generic a lot of other let's players have that.

Intro is horrible, a quick wipe won't cut it. Either have one or don't lol

audio quality is okay.

Outro title card is also meh.

Feels like a new channel and you have improvements needed.




This is pretty much my second job now lol

I dislike vlogs like I stated before but your audio quality and cuts are nice.

You seem a bit nervous when speaking, lighten up and relax a bit. Unless that is just how you talk then it's whatever.

The cuts are okay, although at points a bit fast. Your profile picture is a normal picture but maybe get someone to make a custom one?

Intro is nice, short and sweet.

Outro seems bland but outros are damn hard to get right I will admit.

Not bad for a vlog, congrats on the 420 toke subscribes man.

Still hate vlogs though lol[DOUBLEPOST=1456294685,1456294139][/DOUBLEPOST]

Your little animation for Into the Arcade is nice ALTHOUGH I would suggest smoothing out the tween. It feels a bit choppy honestly.

Your audio quality is a bit harsh, but it's okayish.

EDIT: Your newest video has better quality gg you did good big mama grgak is proud.

Your edits is a bit eh.
Hard for live action though so I get it.

Your outro card has two videos poking out from your main one.

It feels cluttered and you could just shrink down the main one a bit so the others fit.

Love the brick background and the characters though.

Not bad, still needs some work I see some potential though. Hope you get bigger kiss kiss xoxo




It's just a speed painting channel.

I mean it's cool and all and people will like it but I can't really say much on it.

Your drawings are okay, needs improvement but don't we all lol.

Fix your banner also, it feels abit uh
cliparty I guess haha.

Outros also a bit bland but like I have said those are a b***h to get down perfectly.

I dunno, it's okay I guess haha. Boring more than anything.[DOUBLEPOST=1456294859][/DOUBLEPOST]


Reaction channels are the scum of youtube at the moment.

So to spare you the hate I will say stop doing it, even if you got big you will be getting more backlash than anything.

The royalty music is a bit loud
change your profile picture not a lot of people like real life profile pictures.
your banner is horrible.
Outro is garbage but everyones is pretty much lol.
Thank you so much for the real criticism bro!
 
Try to do something different.

Your outro is okay generic but okay.

No intro though.which is meh.
Working on the different part. Already recorded some gameplay with "obstacles" ;)

I'm still wondering if an intro is actually worth it. Had one, but I'm not using it anymore. Not sure about that one though.

Anyway. Thanks!
 
I don't think I've asked you for feedback yet, but my memory is horrible. Appreciate the feedback
 
I don't know what to say lol[DOUBLEPOST=1456368714,1456368079][/DOUBLEPOST]

Your edits are garbage, honestly.
Theres no fluidity but instead just a copy paste feel. No thanks.

Horrible profile picture and banner but it's a new channel. I'll let it slide.

Audio quality is okay.

Nothing to fancy.

I can't give much criticism to someone that just started out so I mean.

Work on using motion tweens to your advantage not to mention having any images prepared before hand as looking at your videos it felt just ON THE SPOTish and with edits you really need to think them out accordingly.

xxooxoxoxo


Thanks, i'll try ;p
 
Hi there I like you're channel profile, i think the channel art needs more eye catching! :) Could you review mine please if that's okay
 
Hello, my wife and I recently started a vlog on YouTube and I'd like to make sure that we get going in the right direction. That won't happen with people sugar-coating things for us, so please.... let us know what we can do to make our channel better :)

Thank you for your time and we love you, too :) <3
 
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