I personally don't really care too much for Star Wars, but I'm sure that it would have been really interesting for people who enjoy it. I do have some criticism though. Firstly, you really need to get a pop filter, it will make your recordings so much better because you won't get that sound of your breath hitting the mic. Secondly, look into downloading videos rather than recording them (and then credit them), this way you'll avoid having any overlays on top of it. Good job overall though!