honest review for a new format type of video

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Hi there guys,looking for some honest feedback regarding one video I actually made today.
I ussually post informational stuff regarding dating,but now I am trying to be funny....sounds ridiculous but its what I'm actually after,trying to make some content for the younger ones.
The main question: what do you think about the editing of the video?
Lighting is not that good ,I just ordered a ring of light,probably is gonna help,at least I hope so.
What do you think about the actual idea of what I am trying in the video?
Its still content for grown ups,I'm actually doing a sketch of a serious video but turning into a more funnier one.
Any suggestions?Any honest feedback?
Highly appreciated!