Channel is still starting out, I see there's probably 3 videos of substance yet -- and thou've homed in on the current Tmartin and Raw Instinct drama -- that should draw in some notice, but it's not a good place to get bogged down into.
Maybe need a slightly better mic (or less gain on it) perhaps it's a headset, but it's pulling in a lot of sound artifacts and a lot of pop. Well, none of this is altogether bad, since people are used to it in gaming videos anyway, we're not exactly a bunch who can afford good sound equipment.
The commentary I listened to, the Raw Instinct drama, worked perfectly fine. I also watched "Question Time" and I think that there's a good weekly or bi-monthly thing to do there, with some sort of just commentary and discussion of matches; it makes it more like an e-sports commentary to talk about playing the game. Perhaps very niche audience, but it's good to keep people who know both speakers.