Hints and Tips for a Songwriter

TheCameronWatson

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Hey all, a coupe of days ago I uploaded my first ever attempt at writing a full song on my ukulele. It was received well by friends but, they are friends so may be lying a little. Was wondering if another singer/songwriters could check it out and give me a few hints etc and even if your not if you could tell me what you think. Thanks so much!

 

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Okay, first of all the song is awesome, I really liked it and your voice is great!
One thing, It's a littleee quiet, it might just be for me, I'm not sure

1:13 I really liked this bit!

1:25 feels a little disjointed, the next bit at 1:38 sounds great though, I can't tell what difference there is but... my ears are weird, maybe?

That's literally the only thing I can tell you about, The whole song is really really good, You deserve more subs!
 
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Hey, thank you for the feedback!! The disjointed bit is literally down to my forgetting the lyrics to the next and forgetting what strumming pattern I was going to do haha. Thank you so much for taking the time to write this out and thanks for subbing! :)