Hi im "Dunny" and Im contemplating to remove my first video.

[Dunny]

Im 18 years old and from South Africa. Over past 3 weeks ive created my first video(it took so much time) . I was inspired by filthyfrank and maxmoefoe after their "Human Cake". I personally think I went too far. Looking at my first video I feel a bit like "what the heck was I thinking?" So before I remove it could you guys give me some constructive criticism?

 

[Jawad Soomro]

Hi Dunny, its good that you made a video after inspiring filthyfrank and maxmoefoe. Your channel link isn't working, I hope you will fix it soon so that I help you out in constructive criticism. Welcome to YTTALK

 

[Pierre Maynard]

Hello there! Welcome to the forums Hope you enjoy your stay here and good luck!

 

[AncientEmma]

Hey, welcome to the forum! First videos are always like that, but they're a great place to grow from! Just do what makes you happy and everything else will take care of itself. Good luck!

 

[Dunny]

I've just fixed my channel url. Its the roast video that im contemplating to remove.

 

[Crown]

Im 18 years old and from South Africa. Over past 3 weeks ive created my first video(it took so much time) . I was inspired by filthyfrank and maxmoefoe after their "Human Cake". I personally think I went too far. Looking at my first video I feel a bit like "what the heck was I thinking?" So before I remove it could you guys give me some constructive criticism?

I've moved your thread to the reviews forum. Please note that the review forum is the only forum where members can ask for feedback on their videos and channel (including artwork). We like to keep this sort of thread out of the main forums.

 

[Uncle Eggnog]

that Puking is a bit intense dude -_- i like the video just the first bit is a bit gnarly in my honest opinion dude but keep up the good work !!!

 

[Dunny]

that Puking is a bit intense dude -_- i like the video just the first bit is a bit gnarly in my honest opinion dude but keep up the good work !!!

Thanks for the feedback