Hey guys! Would love feedback on the jokes in my newest video!

[DieMan]

Just released my second Mordhau video, and I had a blast making it:

Would love to get feedback on:

1. The comedy in the video
2. The thumbnail
3. The editing
4. Overall impression

Thank you in advance!

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

violent & vulgar,,,,but good thumbnail design visual effects & editing

 

[DieMan]

violent & vulgar,,,,but good thumbnail design visual effects & editing

thanks for the response?

so mirror in your opinion it is too much with the profanity?

 

[Pro Kie]

comedy is good, editing is good, to improve I would change the font to make your thumbnail pop out a bit more.

 

[mirrorlessNY(youtuber)]

thanks for the response?

so mirror in your opinion it is too much with the profanity?

too much for me, but this is your chosen style/direction so keep going & have fun

 

[DieMan]

too much for me, but this is your chosen style/direction so keep going & have fun

Okay thanks for being honest, appreciate it!