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ChoccyMilkCrew

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Ignore my previous thread lol. My buddies and I, here at ChoccyMilkCrew, would love to get some feedback on our first video! Feel free to give any criticism/support you can! Thanks!

 

Olroy

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Definitely too long, I clicked out in the first 5 seconds, having silence and then someone asking if its recording now is NOT how you need to start a video, you definitely should have started out with a pre-planned intro addressing the audience to immediately engage them and make them feel interested.
 

ChoccyMilkCrew

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Yeah, it was our first video and we had no idea what we were doing but we are improving! Thanks for the feedback!
 

PhoenixAnimus

The king of the fire birds
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Have to say there isn't really anything I can add that hasn't already been said, however I have to say I do love the energy you guys seem to have, hopefully you keep it up. And welcome to the fun house.