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Feedback on Video Lyrics and Quality of Songwriting

enternetevolution

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Hello Yttalk forum,

I am looking for an honest evaluation of a music video I wrote called Give Me More. Please listen carefully to the video lyrics and please critique the quality of songwriting. I have been writing for years and finally decided to take my songwriting and turn them into music videos.
Thank you for your help.