Feedback on my video?

Wigglenator

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I've been playing around a bit with my commentary and stuff.

I was wondering if you think I should change my intro/outro.
What do you like/dislike about my commentary style? (please note I am still learning)
Likes and dislikes in the editing / video itself?
Overall feedback in general.

This video is of my 2nd night on FNAF.
So I ask for your feedback on how I can improve myself to help bring better content to my viewers.