Feedback on creepy video

[Please Don't Turn Around]

I was wondering if you could tell me what you like about my last video, and what you don't. And what you would do different to improve quality.

 

[YAOG]

Interesting idea, but it needs to be much shorter and maybe some creepy music as well.

 

[AhrinYT]

The video's concept seems very interesting and worthy of a good video, however the fact that the video's dead silent and the texts move rather slowly removes the sense of fear in a way. At the same time, if the viewers are hooked in by the video early on, they may get bored on how slow the video is moving. These are just my opinions however, so please don't take what I say too seriously. Hope I was able to help ^-^

 

[Please Don't Turn Around]

Thanks very much - I really appreciate the feedback!