Feedback of my video

Hasa92

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Hello, I wish to get some feedback on my video, I just started doing these commentary kind of videos where I talk about a subject with usually gaming in the background.

Know I know my English isn't that great but what you think I should have done differently in this video?

Edit: Lol forgot to actually link the video.

 
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