I'm gonna be kinda harsh, so if your feelings are easily hurt, don't read this. That music's bad. It's notoriously hated on Youtube for being the most generic and annoying music on Youtube. Also, I think you should try to have more confidence in your voice, and go into this with more of a plan maybe. I think a Day in the Life video is something you do when you get big, because people already care enough about you to wanna know how your boring day is. Also, tell some jokes. People come on Youtube to either learn something or to be entertained. Check one of those boxes and you should be good. That's all the criticism I've really got, aside from try to have cool shots in your video if it's a longer vlog style video like this one. Have a shot of you making the waffles or have a cool shot from somewhere else in the room while you're editing your video. You could show some character while you're editing like, when you mess up, you can get frustrated. Just some drop of uniqueness would work wonders for you. OK, that's it. I should probably say some pros to leave a better taste in your mouth, right? I do really like your profile picture on YTtalk, but you don't have it set to the same one on your Youtube channel. You should really set it on your Youtube channel.