Bro your volume sucks a**! I think you could improve by shortening the intro a LOT, like to 15 seconds or so explaining what the video is. You should find more canned laughter and drum rolls so it is not so repetitive too, like some canned laughter where it is a huge crowd just cracking up or like from sitcoms would be cool. If you made a stupid picture to show for some of the jokes, like a person with a "honey comb", it would be a good effect. That might take a while, but it would add to the head shakes you get from the corny jokes. If you continue doing these, you should categorize the jokes so you don't waste all the good ones. I did laugh though, but I think some simple effects could improve this greatly. FIRST FIX YOUR MIC, lol!