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So, I just finished shooting a music video for a friend of mine who is a musician and I'm not particularly practiced in music videos or the writing of scripts for them, so if you could offer advice on either to improve I'd appreciate it greatly!
That's what I wrote for the script how do I make it more detailed and organized?
Here is the video:
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*SHOT OF JOHN SITTING ON COUCH WITH CONTROLLER IN HAND, JULIA BOLTS OUT OF THE HALLWAY, JOHN POPS UP OFF COUCH RUNNING TOWARDS*
*SHOT OF FRONT DOOR OUTSIDE, DOOR POPS OPEN, JULIA RUNNING OUT, JOHN CATCHES HER BAG, SHE DROPS IT, HE STOPS MOVING HOLDING BAG
JULIA CONTINUES RUNNING FORWARD TOWARDS/PAST CAMERA* *SHOOT SCENE CLOSE AS WELL AS FAR*
*SHOT FROM LEFT SIDE OF CAR, JOHN STANDING ON PORCH WITH BAG DEFOCUSED, JULIA OPENING DOOR AND SITTING DOWN IN FOCUS, DRIVING OFF*
*song starts*
Can use flashbacks as they are remembering each other. She could be going through things in her 'room' looking at them, then it flashes to flashback
when that item was given to her/memorable to her (curt gives her necklace, jacket that he put on her when cold,
window scenes of curt singing w/o guitar looking out window, julialooking out window with a sad looking face wishing she could be with curt
Another scene of curt in room playing guitar and singing by himself.
JULIA writing letter to parents, outlining reasons why she cant do this and has to go. Juxtaposed with flashbacks scenes. next time you see her writing, shes almost done with the letter.
AS shes finishing, camera changes to curt singing. Next time you see her she begins the next scene, the packing clothes scene.
Towards end of video, slow motion scenes of JULIA throwing clothes/stuff into bag hurriedly, running towards door *parents start chasing her*, next angle is of the front door
she is running out of it while her dad is grabbing bag, she drops bag and leaves it while running over to car, angle in car shes puttin key in while parents on porch out of focus
with dads hands up looking p****d, she dont care dough, she drives off, end scene.
Scene of JULIA driving hurriedly,
Here is the video: